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写诗给朋友现在还时兴吗

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发表于 2016-11-8 22:12:29 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
之前认识一个朋友

刚开始相处的还比较顺利 后来闹了些矛盾 就bye bye了
在说再见的时候 我一时兴起 赠与了她一首诗

她看之后说了两字 “真棒” 后就从此消失了
那首歪诗我自己看了都觉得渗的慌  

我称呼她时从来不用她的真名 只用化名 小狐狸
诗中隐藏了她的化名 表达了对其的追忆和对往事的肯定 以及对不可挽回的遗憾的感叹

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“夜深忽梦少年事,梦啼妆泪红阑干”

世上有很多别离都是过于匆匆的  能赠其歪诗 也算有个像样的尾声

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发表于 2016-11-8 22:49:22 | 显示全部楼层
In Korean ????
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 楼主| 发表于 2016-11-8 23:04:56 | 显示全部楼层

in chinese,
little fox is chinese ,come on boy
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发表于 2016-11-8 23:07:18 | 显示全部楼层
At least she understood your poem.
I do not though.

Better figure out what was the conflict.
Use facts please.  Analyze analyze analyze.
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 楼主| 发表于 2016-11-8 23:14:25 | 显示全部楼层
babyme 发表于 2016-11-8 23:07
At least she understood your poem.
I do not though.

i do not understand why the hell i always experience this kind of breaking up of relationships

before, the milk candy girl angry at me
then this time, fox suddenly quitted left me alone,

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发表于 2016-11-8 23:16:12 | 显示全部楼层
Adamsmith-moon 发表于 2016-11-8 23:14
i do not understand why the hell i always experience this kind of breaking up of relationships

be ...

Is your performance in the room BAD?
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 楼主| 发表于 2016-11-9 22:37:10 | 显示全部楼层
babyme 发表于 2016-11-8 23:16
Is your performance in the room BAD?

do not understand what you mean by performance in the room
does that mean domestic violence or the movement on bxx (usually between a married young couple)?

if the former, no, never physically harm anyone
the latter, perhaps yes,
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发表于 2016-11-9 23:33:46 | 显示全部楼层
Adamsmith-moon 发表于 2016-11-9 22:37
do not understand what you mean by performance in the room
does that mean domestic violence or the ...

You need Masters and Johnson?
Remember mutual feeling, do not be SELFISH and you will be fine.
Care for other party , OK.
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 楼主| 发表于 2016-11-10 03:04:42 | 显示全部楼层
babyme 发表于 2016-11-9 23:33
You need Masters and Johnson?
Remember mutual feeling, do not be SELFISH and you will be fine.
Car ...

i am a nice guy same as you
alway care for the partner as you did
but the thing is the partner left due to a variety of reasons
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